1) Get rid of black space in-between clock and third cup of tea
2) Get rid of black space in-between turning of pages and wide angle of photo album
3) Make clock clip in-between panic scenes longer, because it looks like time has stopped
4) Make panic scene a bit longer and add more cuts in-between each clip to make the viewer feel panicked too
5) Add audio of clock ticking sourced from Youtube/web
6) Add notes and paper reminders in-between clips, especially towards the end
7) Add cross dissolves and fades on beginning and end clip to make the video flow better, at the moment it starts very suddenly.
7) Add cross dissolves and fades on beginning and end clip to make the video flow better, at the moment it starts very suddenly.
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